Score: 2

"that's it?"

submission: *Prayer*

date: November 15, 2009

This was really lack luster. There were 3 scenes that were fairly epic, but mostly this was LAME.

next time be picky about who works on the collab, dont just let any kid that cant draw or animate.... draw and animate... it's just not a recipe for awesome.

Score: 5

"lack luster"

submission: : Door Holding :

date: July 21, 2008

For as often as foamy is release, you think he could be cleaned up, and refined. The line quality should be crisp, not haphazard.

also, very little went into this.

This was just a silly rant that went on one day, and turned into a boring animation.

Jumping horses to the other character (the girl) how come she never has good lip-syncing. Her mouth does the same four animation steps, o O P |
: pay attention you'll notice it.

This foamy episode had very little to it, and the quality is consistantly poor, I give it a 5-10

Score: 4

"meh"

submission: Nix Timelapse

date: March 31, 2008

the body was good but why in the heck do you use a smiley face?

That totally kills it. He looks pretty serious until you get to his ridiculous face. . .
---- I looked back at a couple of your other flashes (suspicious joe or w/e) and I must say you should work on drawing faces. Something about the simplistic faces which are insanely over done, destroys what could be awesome.

You have to find something to set yourself apart from everyone else.

and you should start with the face.

:)

Score: 8

"great game!"

submission: Swept to the End

date: October 30, 2007

Graphixs = simple and elegant (reminds me of the Reanimator game)
game play = a little dull. once you figured out all of the patterns.

Zombies = fun but lame, all I had to do was hold th axe attack,

Kicking = only reason I had to kick was to get outa the dungeon and kick those damn wolf-dogs. It didn't seem to do much good, if any anywhere else.

Big hairy guys = What's all the fuss? they jump over you, you hit them, them come back, you go in the same direction as them, they hit the ground and jump over you again as you hit them with the axe. not hard (comment directed at the whinners below me not to the game creator)

boss = easy, as most bosses tend to be in games.

Monster parade, fun.

Score: 7

"!!!"

submission: Schwarzkäppchen

date: August 30, 2007

MY ATTACK and defend keys didn't work D:

I really want to play it =(

Score: 5

"totally unoriginal"

submission: Zombie Infection

date: August 3, 2007

i know you said BASED off of 28 days later, I didn't think you meant Copied and changed small bits like. . . instead of a kid it was a guy with a shotgun. . . oh wait. . . that's basicly all that changed.

But apart from that it was a decent flash.

can I suggest that you work on drawing your people. . . they are a bit unproportional, heads to big, arms to short, and their eyes are just plain goofy.

But apart from your ability to think of a flash all of your own, . . . or your ability to draw people, this was an alright flash.

Score: 5

"Repitition is not best"

submission: Purplenum: Survival

date: May 15, 2007

While this was a solid game i believe it was lacking a great deal of variety.

Seriously, getting pas 100 baddies all because i stood on the 1st layer above ground on the far right hand side and held the spacebar to jump . . . that's rediculous. The only thing i HAD to move for was the lazer beam thing.

Sure the pace quickened. . . but is that really enough? I don't think it is, The repitition is VERy easily picked up on and drains the fun from it entirely.

If you could some how make it more random as to what comes out that would make this SO much better.

until then i'm giving it a 2, because it bored the poo out of me.

Score: 9

"i'm queezy |P"

submission: The Missile Game 3D HS

date: February 18, 2007

that was pretty awesome, sept im motion sick now . . .

|P

Score: 8

". . . wow . . ."

submission: Zelda: UO Epis:3

date: January 6, 2007

That was pretty awesome!

A couple notes of constructive critisism tho, the eyes of your characters, do you cut off the color part? If so, you should consider not doing that because some times you see the white of the eye where the iris should be. Instead layer your eyes so that the outline is on top, the pupil, the iris, then the white of the eye, so that your eyes don't cut themselves off.

Also, your spelling was a bit bad from time to time. Have someone proof read.

And my last thing, Have more enthusiasm in your voices, "I want to know why you called me an incarnation. Tell me why!" Should sound more like " TELL ME WHYYY!!! " *lunge with sword*

Don't completely discredit this critisism because i havn't published my own flash anim to newgrounds.

That is all (you got a 5)

Score: 7

"One thing"

submission: A Christmas Tail

date: December 24, 2006

find someone who can sing and that would be PERFECT xD